PsychologyPersonalStatement.com
by Dr. Robert F. Edinger
* Helping Applicants Since 2005 
drrobertedinger@gmail.com

Sample first paragraphs for the MA Degree in Psychology

 

Example 1: Your intensive weekend program leading to the MA Degree in Psychology at the ____ Institute of Integral Studies (CIIS) is my first choice for advanced professional training because of what I see as the unparalleled emphasis that you place on the holistic dimensions of mental health and well being. Probably the weakest aspect of my application is the fact that I earned my undergraduate degree in industrial design. Nevertheless, my studies did connect with Psychology at many points – particularly industrial organizational; and I also earned a minor in Holistic Health. Thus, I feel strongly that I am an excellent fit with the ____ Institute and your dedication to holistic strategies.

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Example 2: I see your Master’s Degree Program in Psychology at ____ University to be the optimal springboard to empower me to realize my central professional goals, to become a professional life coach, dedicating the balance of my life to the service of community as a professional counselor, in addition to being a minister and motivational speaker for churches and women’s groups. I seek a professional lifetime giving my all as a beacon of light which shines bright in a world laced with darkness and difficulties facing many if not most people. I desire to earn the credentials which will better equip me to perform the professional roles that I have chosen. After extensive research into various university programs, I decided that the MA Program in Psychology at ____ University was the best suited to enable me to achieve my goals.  The fact that ____’s accreditation allows graduates from the program to obtain a license in order to open a practice is especially attractive. ​​

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Writing a successful personal statement for an MA program in Psychology involves a mix of self-reflection, clear communication, and strategic positioning. Here are some tips and guidance to help you craft an outstanding statement:

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1. Start with a Compelling Introduction

Begin with a hook that grabs the reader’s attention. This could be an anecdote, a quote, or a personal experience that ignited your interest in psychology.

2. Clearly Define Your Goals

Explain why you want to pursue an MA in Psychology. Outline your short-term and long-term career goals and how this program fits into your plan.

3. Showcase Your Qualifications

Highlight your academic achievements, relevant coursework, research experiences, internships, and any professional work in the field of psychology. Be specific about how these experiences have prepared you for graduate study.

4. Reflect on Personal Experiences

Share personal stories that demonstrate your passion for psychology. This could include challenges you've overcome, personal growth moments, or experiences that solidified your commitment to the field.

5. Emphasize Research Interests

Discuss your research interests and how they align with the faculty’s expertise at the institution you're applying to. Mention any specific professors you’d like to work with and why.

6. Demonstrate Fit with the Program

Explain why you chose this specific program. Mention the unique aspects of the program, such as specializations, faculty, research facilities, or partnerships that attracted you.

7. Highlight Your Skills and Attributes

Discuss the skills and qualities that make you a strong candidate, such as critical thinking, analytical abilities, communication skills, empathy, and resilience. Provide examples to back up your claims.

8. Be Concise and Focused

Stick to the word limit and ensure every sentence serves a purpose. Avoid unnecessary jargon and focus on clear, concise, and impactful writing.

9. Proofread and Edit

Revise your statement multiple times. Check for grammar and spelling errors, and ensure your writing is polished and professional. It can be helpful to have mentors, peers, or professional services review your statement for feedback.

10. Be Authentic

Finally, be yourself. Authenticity resonates with admissions committees. Show your genuine interest and enthusiasm for psychology and convey your unique voice.